- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7Tdu-7vy4U
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In the form of a formal letter to your instructor, you should provide a descriptive Reflection in which you do each of the following: 1. ex...
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- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7Tdu-7vy4U
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Content: In 2nd para, he can share an example of a value he has gained from others so far and how it might have altered with his mindset on ...
Hey Yu Siang! Your video is informative and it was good that you used hand gestures while speaking! Maybe one suggestion that could improve your video would be try your best to eliminate those filler words. It is something I am trying to do as well which is tough, but other than that, well done on your video!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Yu Siang, for posting this informative pitch. (I thought I had comments already.) If you were to revise it, I'd suggest speaking with a bit more drama in your voice.
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