Hey Yu Siang! Your video is informative and it was good that you used hand gestures while speaking! Maybe one suggestion that could improve your video would be try your best to eliminate those filler words. It is something I am trying to do as well which is tough, but other than that, well done on your video!
Thank you, Yu Siang, for posting this informative pitch. (I thought I had comments already.) If you were to revise it, I'd suggest speaking with a bit more drama in your voice.
Hey Yu Siang! Your video is informative and it was good that you used hand gestures while speaking! Maybe one suggestion that could improve your video would be try your best to eliminate those filler words. It is something I am trying to do as well which is tough, but other than that, well done on your video!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Yu Siang, for posting this informative pitch. (I thought I had comments already.) If you were to revise it, I'd suggest speaking with a bit more drama in your voice.
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